The picture of recces: people hitting the ball, peolpe talking, people eating snacks at the lunch tables, boys kicking the ball high, girls playing on the monkey bars, kids playing tag, teachers watching us, the bell ringed kids going in their lines
The picture of recces: people hitting the ball, peolpe talking, people eating snacks at the lunch tables, boys kicking the ball high, girls playing on the monkey bars, kids playing tag, teachers watching us, the bell ringed kids going in their lines
Again, next time do 2 paragraphs. Limit run on sentences, and make your blogs longer. Be more descriptive about what you saw. What did you hear, feel, etc?
I like how you said the picture of recces people hitting the ball.